Javier DiFrancisco says:
Read first fifteen pages, like what I read a lot. Only problem I saw was the motive behind Rosaline getting with Romeo as a scheme hatched by his loyal friend Mercutio. Her character doesn't need any push from anyone to teach Romeo a lesson, especially not from his best friend.
Also, there should be more of a scene involving the Capulet's welcoming their cousin into their home before Rosaline goes out to meet Mercutio and Romeo. In this scene there could be the starting point for the whole story included in dialogue about future events, such as the big party, as well as the feuding family rivalry whereby Rosaline discovers that the very same Romeo she saw in the streets is part of it...(Light Bulb)
I will continue reading more as my interest is piqued as I am a huge Shakespeare fan. Love the concept about the story behind the story, just not sure if the motive is correct. I will let you know as I read more. But so far so good.
Also, there should be more of a scene involving the Capulet's welcoming their cousin into their home before Rosaline goes out to meet Mercutio and Romeo. In this scene there could be the starting point for the whole story included in dialogue about future events, such as the big party, as well as the feuding family rivalry whereby Rosaline discovers that the very same Romeo she saw in the streets is part of it...(Light Bulb)
I will continue reading more as my interest is piqued as I am a huge Shakespeare fan. Love the concept about the story behind the story, just not sure if the motive is correct. I will let you know as I read more. But so far so good.