Now that Amazon has shown interest in a few series, the once-steady activity on my project page has dwindled to nothing. I'm not a pro writer, but I do my best to offer useful criticism. In return, I ask that you beat the snot out of me, my script and my premise.
...Might help if I link to my pilot, which is here: http://studios.amazon.com/projects/11696
don't have time at the moment, only read the log line...hope you are familiar with http://100yss.org/
they had an EXTREMELY well attended, professional (not Trekkies) conference in orlando last year, apparently videotaped and distributed online
good luck, look forward to reading a revision sometime
Much appreciated, Eric! I wasn't aware of that particular link-I'll have to spend some time studying it tonight, see how it influences my next revision.