Can anyone give me any feedback on this? I'm willing to read anyones script who is willing to read mine. This is something that I've been working on for about a year. "Constructive critcism," welcome on both soth sides. My high points and lows. Thanks everyone.
Hmmm, so good you spammed it twice - lol!
Ditto response - Jim.
Sorry, jamster. This is probably the first thread I posted,well maybe second. lol. Trying to get a feel of things.
No worries - know the feeling - lol!
Jim
ps IF I ever get a few days spare I'll add it to the pile that I'm suppose to read...
Thanks,jamster. Let me know what you got out there and I'll take a look.
The Pitch - draft 4" please Sir, tks Jim.
Gonna do a rewrite this Sunday Ant, so any feedback appreciated...
