5th draft...

is up!

Enjoy the ride...

Jim.

No celebs were injured in the making of this sp ;-)

Any takers?

Pretty please... ;-)

Great job! I was sold on this project when I read the previous version and I liked what you did with this one. As I said in another comment, I am more willing to accept the spectacle at the end because of what was added. A dimly lit nightclub table to a color charged, synchronized dance scene would be like a roller coaster ride for the viewer. I would want that white bell-bottomed suit to glow in that scene.

After reading this version, I am wondering if a couple of subtle hints about the identities of the three might be helpful. Nothing to bang the viewer over the head but make them look back and say "Heeey, yeah..."

I hope more writers read and review this project. As others have mentioned, a movie about writing might be a tough sell, especially a comedy. (Usually, most people can agree on what drama is but comedy? Thats's a different story) It seems writers always want to know the "why?" and, to me anyway, "why" isn't that important in comedy.

This script is a winner. It's well crafted and it's easy to see your heart is in it.

Geez thanks Joe - now if you can put this up in a review... ;-)

Thanks mate - Jim.

... ;0

Thanks Joe, all I've gotta do now is get it into the hands of a producer who 'sees' it too...

Jim

...which is soooo easy - right? ;-)

...quite ironic don't you think?

... ;-)

...waiting for...

(whispers) saw on todays 'n&n' list...

...(ssssh) and ten minutes later 'another' too!

Honest...

Colour me 'made up' ;-0

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tick-tock...

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'still waiting'...

...and waiting...

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...still waiting...

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5 days until I start a final re-write...

number 6 around the corner...

I got a chain letter by fax. It's very simple. You just fax a dollar bill to everybody on the list.

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