I just put up the cover photo for this screenplay. I'd like to know
what some of you think. Would you plop down money to see this
film.
Thanks,
Richard
Looks good, but you should add it to your script page as well.
The one thing I thought when I was looking at it, was that it appeared too "busy."
I like the gargoyle and soldiers at the top corners but if this is layered in photoshop, I would reduce the opacity so they are a bit fainter. The skeletons of the dinosaurs on the lower right and left I would ditch completely and leave those corners filled with the white fog. The little reaper in the middle is cool.
Looks good!
Personally, I think the minotaur above the white house would be compelling enough. All that other stuff could be erased. There's so many elements going on, with the dino skeletons, swat team, gargoyle, and grim reaper, they all kind of detract from each other and really constrict the awesomeness of the minotaur.
Thanks Robert,
The screenplay is based on my own unpublished novel which has
all of those elements. Maybe less is more in this case.
I appreciate your comments.
Thanks Joe,
Appreciate your thoughts.
Richard
With the cover image for Asterius, I was looking to capture what the
story is all about.
So far, no one has noticed that the American Flag on top of
The White House is turned upside down--a signal of real distress.
In any event, I believe it is a thriller that you'll enjoy. Based on my own
unpublished novel.
Thanks,
Richard
P.S. Asterius Cover Image
With the cover image of Asterius only uploaded today, I have already
received some positive feedback. The screenplay was up for almost
a month without any cover image. So clearly a picture is worth a
thousand words.
Richard
Richard,
Love the images, awesome writing, real page turner.
DGS
I like the new cover with asterius and naomi. Looks good. You get more of the feel for the love story with that cover. I think each of the three have aspects that are great for the film.
