Good First script.

I would watch this show as it is written right now but the script needs a lot of work. I think it needs to be a little lighter and funnier. Maybe cut out the talk about the dead mother and save that for later.
I also think it would help if Josh gave Ben a stack of money to go and buy suit and he uses that money to put down on the fight. To me it doesn't make sense that a person living in a run down motel would have enough money to bet that much on a fight.
Think its a great Idea for a show I would love too see