The Title.

First off I just want to make it perfectly clear that I have yet to read the script. I promise I will but I can't guarantee when I'll get around to it. Part of me is hoping a new version will appear before I begin so I don't comment on things that you have changed or adjusted or may have just scrapped altogether.

That being said the one thing that sticks out like a sore thumb right from the get go is the title. I'm really not digging it. It could work if it was a syndicated series a la Hercules/Xena/Jack of All Trades, but I'm not getting the cheese vibe from this that those had that would make the title work. The premise and the trailer videos have completely sold me on the idea. I do absolutely want to see this get made and I'm 100% behind you without having read the script. I'm just simply not sold on the title to the point that I would have passed it over and missed out on this gem had there been more options to look at.

But as always with these kinds of things it's a matter of opinion.

What's funny is that you're actually not the first one to mention that. AS actually mentions it in the story notes in the coverage they sent over. The title actually comes from the game the nerds play, it's called WizardsQuest. Personally, I know I'm terrible at titles, because, and I'm being completely honest, I'm worrying about other things.

Thanks for your interest and support. There probably won't be a new rewrite coming up any time before June, so if you'd like to give it read, go for it. Newest draft will be a pretty large rewrite...