Neal Barringer says:
wait. Don't tell me how it ends. I wanted to read it for myself.
I just wanted to point out that "supernarutal forces" is not Jim's typo - that's actually how the logline reads.
Why would a jury foreman approach a judge? Don't they just sit in the jury box?
Andrew says:
Usually the jury foreman sits in the jury box. If he wants to communicate with the judge, he hands a written note to the baliff, who takes it up to the judge.
Why are you doing this?
Read the script first. Post your review afer you understand what the story is.
Why are you doing this?
Read the script first. Post your review afer you understand what the story is.
Neal Barringer says:
I skipped right to the end because that's where the brilliant Robbie Lewis usually prints his synopsis. You can learn the entire story in like a page and a half.
Robbie Lewis says:
Scott,
It is the 1770's. Do you have evidence that court preceedings are the same back then as it is today? You don't. You guys are trying to hard.
Next!
It is the 1770's. Do you have evidence that court preceedings are the same back then as it is today? You don't. You guys are trying to hard.
Next!
Robbie Lewis says:
Jim,
Did you read what the audience was doing before she swivels her head? They must have been doing something for her to shut them up. If you want to criticise, you better read thoroughly.
Next!
Did you read what the audience was doing before she swivels her head? They must have been doing something for her to shut them up. If you want to criticise, you better read thoroughly.
Next!
Robbie Lewis says:
Jim,
Told you my writing is too deep for you. Her real father is the devil numbnut. You are making yourself looking like an idiot.
Told you my writing is too deep for you. Her real father is the devil numbnut. You are making yourself looking like an idiot.
I just read 10 pages. Endless typos, bad grammar, contrived story. Credit card maker in a bank? Urns that just happen to spill ashes onto it?
Why is she so mad at the jury foreman? Clearly she's guilty.
Why is she so mad at the jury foreman? Clearly she's guilty.
Robbie Lewis says:
Jim quit while you're ahead, you are looking silly. And don't correct me on my previous post because i said "looking" instead of "look."
Robbie Lewis says:
Jim,
What is so unclear about that. There is a comma after "Judge." It must be him.
Next!
What is so unclear about that. There is a comma after "Judge." It must be him.
Next!
Neal Barringer says:
can we send these scripts to Carson Reeves for Amateur Friday? That would be awesome!
Calvin M Keeling says:
I think it's time to use the exit sign with Robbie. I wish him no harm, but I can't take his manner seriously. And, quite frankly, I'm getting tired of his rants against everyone here. It ain't healthy for him or us.
I suggest we invoke an old Anabaptist practice called "the Ban." In which members of the community can have nothing to do with the offender until such time as the offender repents of his, or her offenses, against the members of the community.
Bad spelling, bad grammar don't concern me much, putting down other people to build youself up does.
I suggest we invoke an old Anabaptist practice called "the Ban." In which members of the community can have nothing to do with the offender until such time as the offender repents of his, or her offenses, against the members of the community.
Bad spelling, bad grammar don't concern me much, putting down other people to build youself up does.