Which version of this script are you working with. In other words, which version should we read in order to construct an intelligent proposal? Would it be helpful to read both version? I'm looking to avoid confusion and duplication of effort.
Thanks in advance.
Amazon is asking for you to use the 1st Draft as a base. Reading both of our drafts might help, but could stifle your creativity. (Note one of three posted drafts was not written by us) Best of luck.
I read all three scripts. Each offered particulars that helped me frame Rishi, Owen and even Mobu3 in my head, especially MoBu3 because she needs to be fleshed out more fully and yet is the most difficult to flesh out. I like that she isn't cuddly but developing a fun romantic angle for her is one tough nut to crack. Of course we can make her more likable but...I like to do things the hard way i guess. Haha.
