Synopsis:The Spire. An ominous, twisting structure that juts from the ground and spirals towards the heavens. Its presence lingers over Mara, the bounty hunter that is trying to bring back a child missing from the tower. Their journey throughout the dystopian fantasy world is wrought with peril and discovery.
This revision tightens up some of the action and adds a few more fantasy elements to the landscape. Also, I removed all the descriptions of camera moves, because that's just bush-league.