Creative Notes:
Changed a lot of the dialog and a few scenes.
Discord
The women of Bayview mysteriously go crazy, turning on men, beheading them. Life turns to chaos. And for Dale and Kalie, struggling to survive is not as horrific as the answers to the mystery.
Synopsis:
Dale and Kalie enjoy their relationship. Even though she dreams of getting married and he wants to wait until he has a stable career, they make it work.
Rachel and Morris love each other, having been married for years, and though her job as a detective gives her little time to spend with him, they enjoy the moments they do have.
Polly struggles to raise her young daughter, Beth. A single mom, life has left Polly jaded, but she does what she can to raise Beth right.
On another normal day in the town of Bayview, where life slowly moves along, disaster strikes.
At the hospital, women start to appear with blood pouring from their faces, acting erratic.
Around town, more and more women go crazy, and left unchecked, transform into killers hellbent on beheading men.
In a matter of hours the town is in chaos.
For the survivors, who try desperately to figure out the source of the mysterious illness, they fight to stay alive, unaware that their future is now beyond their control. Their fate now belongs to the SHADOWED PEOPLE.
Rachel and Morris love each other, having been married for years, and though her job as a detective gives her little time to spend with him, they enjoy the moments they do have.
Polly struggles to raise her young daughter, Beth. A single mom, life has left Polly jaded, but she does what she can to raise Beth right.
On another normal day in the town of Bayview, where life slowly moves along, disaster strikes.
At the hospital, women start to appear with blood pouring from their faces, acting erratic.
Around town, more and more women go crazy, and left unchecked, transform into killers hellbent on beheading men.
In a matter of hours the town is in chaos.
For the survivors, who try desperately to figure out the source of the mysterious illness, they fight to stay alive, unaware that their future is now beyond their control. Their fate now belongs to the SHADOWED PEOPLE.
Latest Work
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Script 6 - Joseph's 6th Draft07/25/12
All Work
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Script 5 - Joseph's 5th Draft05/22/11
Creative Notes:Added stronger motivation for Pembrook and Polly. Pembrook (Who is now Rachel) has a husband. Polly is a single mother of a 11 year old daughter.
Added a cheesy Prisoner of Alpha Prime reference for fun.
Restructured a bit of Act 3.
Gave the Shadowed People a reason why they're doing what they're doing. -
Script 4 - Joseph's 4th Draft03/25/11
Creative Notes:Minor edits throughout -
Script 3 - Joseph's 3rd Draft02/24/11
Creative Notes:Restructured Act 1. Think it flows better now.
Boiled down the two scenes between Kalie and Dale.
Revised the dialog. Hopefully it is not so ham fisted this time.
Grammar corrections. -
Script 2 - Joseph's 2nd Draft01/31/11
Creative Notes:Took another pass through. Corrected mistakes. Did my best to find sounds and put them in all caps.
Other than that, nothing has changed story-wise. -
Script 1 - Joseph's Original Draft01/29/11
Creative Notes:This is a fast paced horror action script.