Creative Notes:
This version tells the story while reading walks reader through story with vision. Polish grammar, scene heading, character and scene order, action.
Black Wars Deus Ex Macchina
Macchinas and biogens appear on the world stage to foreshadow a new beginning where Black Operations simultaneously lower the last curtain call to raise it while you the puppet on an invisible string get to keep your will, they keep your mind.
Synopsis:
It's chilling, it's exciting! The arrival of Macchinas in humanlike form. True to their name they aim to show everyone they are god in a machine. The satellite macchina dirty deeds remain unknown pulling the world like along like a puppet on a string they choreograph entire world algorithms in behavior to create neuronal and biological events. Drat it! what will the puppet nations do?
Imagine your under silent sound weapons. Macchinas against the human and the world in a historic paradigm shift these characters allow you to see O.Z. in hiding. The world acquires the fact they are all in controlled chaos to control to full blown chaos. They arrive dressed to the cosmic nines, their electromagnetic bodies emit directed energy from every appendage they strike out. The comical Gadfly flits around Dreamland military base. Gadflies swarm every country to their secret underground caves. Under the hypnotic, doolally, bonkers fever they live up to their names.
The tradecraft Pavlovian satellite Macchinas in space control the events God the dubok world where some lives are choreographed to help hide the Black OPS and PSYOPS through free careless living, therefore hiding the surreptitious overt and covert workings of Macchinas, to hell on Earth as they use the miraculous powers of electromagnetic currents to bring themselves and their victims to life after they have killed them.
Like a meteorological fuhrer the Macchinas gather scatter matter energy lining matter up like the four horsemen from hell to rain down a slow apocalypse. Larger than the scientists from distant planets metronome Macchinas man the military space stations emptied of astronauts.
The sidekicks, the redhats, the sanguines and the military follow the heroes to the lair where the Macchinas counter personality inoculate the world leaders to allow the villainous junta of Macchinas equalize the world in hellion fashion.
The sometimes silent whispers of the Macchinas bring bedlam to the world. They can make you swallow your Adam's apple then afterwards chew it.
Imagine your under silent sound weapons. Macchinas against the human and the world in a historic paradigm shift these characters allow you to see O.Z. in hiding. The world acquires the fact they are all in controlled chaos to control to full blown chaos. They arrive dressed to the cosmic nines, their electromagnetic bodies emit directed energy from every appendage they strike out. The comical Gadfly flits around Dreamland military base. Gadflies swarm every country to their secret underground caves. Under the hypnotic, doolally, bonkers fever they live up to their names.
The tradecraft Pavlovian satellite Macchinas in space control the events God the dubok world where some lives are choreographed to help hide the Black OPS and PSYOPS through free careless living, therefore hiding the surreptitious overt and covert workings of Macchinas, to hell on Earth as they use the miraculous powers of electromagnetic currents to bring themselves and their victims to life after they have killed them.
Like a meteorological fuhrer the Macchinas gather scatter matter energy lining matter up like the four horsemen from hell to rain down a slow apocalypse. Larger than the scientists from distant planets metronome Macchinas man the military space stations emptied of astronauts.
The sidekicks, the redhats, the sanguines and the military follow the heroes to the lair where the Macchinas counter personality inoculate the world leaders to allow the villainous junta of Macchinas equalize the world in hellion fashion.
The sometimes silent whispers of the Macchinas bring bedlam to the world. They can make you swallow your Adam's apple then afterwards chew it.
Latest Work
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Script 7 - lucy's 8th Draft02/27/11
All Work
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Script 6 - lucy's 7th Draft02/17/11Creative Notes:Villians and sidekicks introduce action, descriptive scenes tell of place and time adding historical background. Good luck Warner Brothers this is the bullion if you can find me buried under here.
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Script 5 - lucy's 6th Draft02/05/11
Creative Notes:The characters twirl off the page. They cannot wait to be discovered now the story is composed and with little more effort I should get it completed. -
Script 4 - lucy's 4th Draft02/03/11Creative Notes:Characters are now dimensional. Their cut out has been polished. Rolling action introduced to the actual scene description.
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Script 3 - lucy's 3rd Draft02/02/11Creative Notes:The opening with more dramatic event and grammar. Characters clarified and brought to yet better dimension. Still unfinished works.
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Script 2 - lucy's 2nd Draft02/02/11Creative Notes:Ending from crazy to mad and a few grammar corrections. Still works in progress.
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Script 1 - lucy's Original Draft01/31/11Creative Notes:It's chilling, it's exciting, it's action packed. God in a machine and everything on the universe collides to tell the revealed truth about Macchinas inner working. Bioengineered beings take over while humans remain in active denial. You get to keep your will they get to keep your mind. Copyrighted and ready to come alive as a series with characters who twirl in the air and pounce unaware.