Script is in the vein of Grumpy Old Men and Bucket List. We wrote with Clint Eastwood and Morgan Freemen in mind. Added a WRITER'S PITCH to this version of the script.
-Reformatted the entire script for an easier read. Rewrote the cafeteria scene.
-Edited the fight scene in the courtyard to cut down on the name calling and smooth it out.
-Going from 93 to 91 pages in the rewrite.