Creative Notes:
Formatted in paragraph styles with MS Word. Changed font to Courier New.
PREMISE WARS
A screenwriter desperately struggles to come up with the best logline ever for Amazon Studio’s new ‘Premise Wars’ section.
Synopsis:
A lonely writer spends his isolated evenings with a bottle of Rum and an itchy trigger finger deciding the fate of all who enter...The Premise Zone!
Latest Work
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Script 15 - Vernon's 11th Draft06/22/11
All Work
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Script 14 - Vernon's 10th Draft06/05/11
Creative Notes:Ninety three pages and a complete story. The evil doers resemble us, but all works out in the end. -
Script 13 - Vernon's 9th Draft06/03/11
Creative Notes:Protagonist and friends are in deep trouble with at least fifteen pages to save them and the world from a Gaggle take over. -
Script 12 - Vernon's 8th Draft05/29/11
Creative Notes:Added about 10 pages. Developed the premise and tried to get some structure into it. Added treatment notes about where it might go. -
Script 11 - Vernon's 7th Draft05/24/11
Creative Notes:Added a couple of pages. Still holding back hoping someone will chime in. -
Script 10 - Vernon's 6th Draft05/19/11
Creative Notes:The plot thickens. Gaggle Earth Nemsis attacks Premise Wars for world dominance. -
Script 9 - Vernon's 5th Draft05/13/11
Creative Notes:Identified the antagonist and added the dastardly plot that the heroes must struggle to overcome. -
Script 8 - Vernon's 4th Draft05/07/11
Creative Notes:Added a few pages and a new clique, "I'll seal team six his ass."
Correction: on page 19 Jo's script should read Noa's script. Sorry Noa! -
Script 7 - Vernon's 3rd Draft05/04/11
Creative Notes:Restored the style set that somehow got lost. Added a few pages. Tied the scenes together a little more. -
Script 6 - Shaun's 1st Draft05/03/11Creative Notes:Added an insane screenwriter. Dave gave him a bad review on Amazon Studios, and he's none too pleased about it.
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Script 5 - Gerald's 2nd Draft05/02/11Creative Notes:Made the girls straight and added a couple pages.
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Script 4 - Vernon's 2nd Draft05/01/11
Creative Notes:Correctly formatted the RTF with Paragraph Styles set to Script Specifications. This script may now be used as a template for scripts. See the discussion for more details. -
Script 3 - Vernon's 1st Draft04/30/11
Creative Notes:Search for a logline that compels a click. Added a little spice to the comedy. -
Script 2 - Gerald's 1st Draft04/29/11Creative Notes:Dave's girlfriend enters.
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Script 1 - Dave's Original Draft04/27/11
Creative Notes:a COUPLE OF DRINKS IS ALL IT TOOK.