Creative Notes:
Some minor changes for this month's contests. Still trying to get the ending right, as well as expose the theme a little more fluidly.
...while intoxicated
A straight-edge paramedic gets an unjust DUI.
Project collaboration:
By Permission
Synopsis:
Paramedic-in-training Jack Moreno isn't a drinker. At all. But his friends pick up the slack, drinking enough for everyone. When Jack gets offered his dream job at an elite fire station, he caves in to the demands of his boozing buddies, and has a celebratory drink with them.
The fun, drunken evening is brought to a screeching halt when Jack is unjustly arrested for driving under the influence. The DUI threatens his career, his relationships, and his sanity as he watches himself transform into the people he never wanted to become.
Humor meets substance in this sobering look at alcoholism in young adults.
The fun, drunken evening is brought to a screeching halt when Jack is unjustly arrested for driving under the influence. The DUI threatens his career, his relationships, and his sanity as he watches himself transform into the people he never wanted to become.
Humor meets substance in this sobering look at alcoholism in young adults.
Latest Work
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Script 2 - David's 2nd Draft07/31/11
All Work
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Script 1 - David's Original Draft07/01/11
Creative Notes:A realistic comedy with some substance. It does need some development, but before I go ripping it apart, I'd love to get some input. 5000 brains are better than one. I am open to criticism and am not overly defensive. My goal is to become a better writer.
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