Mr. Malcolm's List

Creator: Suzanne Allain
Genre: Comedy
Age rating: Everyone
While the Honourable Mr. Malcolm is London's most eligible bachelor in the year 1818, he's also the most fastidious one. Can any woman ever hope to meet all the requirements on...Mr. Malcolm's List?
Project collaboration: Closed
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Synopsis: The Honourable Mr. Malcolm has a secret. This elusive matrimonial prize, long the target of desperate debutantes and their matchmaking mothers, is well known for his fastidiousness. What is not well known is that he has a list of qualifications for his future bride. Can any woman hope to win the heart of such a hardened critic? Selina Dalton can only try her best. And when she begins to succeed, Jeremy Malcolm is not sure whether he has discovered the perfect woman... Or the perfect hoax.

Latest Work

  • Trailer 5 - Trailer 1 + Dialog Clips. Romantic Trailer. Made by C. Martinelli
    12/28/11
    Creative Notes:
    Dialog track clips added to Trailer #1 from the project's dialog track. Trailer for Suzanne's Amazon Studios project "Mr. Malcolm's List". Ennio Morricone music, 1800-20's images, gentle humor. Take a Regency break. Recharge in 3 minutes. Made by C. Martinelli.
  • Script 5 - Suzanne's 5th Draft
    03/07/13
    Creative Notes:
    Cut more than 20 pages, made characters' motivations more obvious.
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All Work

  • Trailer 4 - Trailer #2 + Dialog Clips. Premise Trailer. Made by C. Martinelli
    12/28/11
    Creative Notes:
    Trailer #2 plus dialog clips from the dialog track for the project. Regency romantic-comedy screenplay. Beethoven and beautiful images from circa 1810. Made by C. Martinelli for Suzanne's project.
  • Script 4 - Suzanne's 4th Draft
    11/29/11
    Creative Notes:
    Revised using the suggestions in the story notes. There are three new scenes in the beginning and a new ending.
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  • Trailer 3 - Suzanne's Trailer
    11/29/11
    Creative Notes:
    Music is Schubert's Quintet For Piano In A Major Trout Finale Allegro Giusto. Illustrations are from the public domain.
  • Trailer 2 - Premise Trailer, Made by C. Martinelli for Suzanne's project.
    11/14/11
    Creative Notes:
    A premise / synopsis trailer. Images from 1800-1824. Beethoven's 7th symphony. This project's Trailer 4 is this trailer plus clips from the project's dialog track. Made by C. Martinelli for Suzanne's project.
  • Script 3 - Suzanne's 3rd Draft
    10/31/11
    Creative Notes:
    Trimmed a little more, fixed scene headings (based on review comments), and added a little more humor.
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  • Trailer 1 - Romantic Trailer, Made by C. Martinelli for Suzanne's Project
    10/24/11
    Creative Notes:
    Ennio Morricone music, 1800-20's images, gentle humor. Take a Regency break. Recharge in 3 minutes. Made by C. Martinelli for Suzanne's project. The project's Trailer 5 is this trailer plus clips from the project's dialog track.
  • Script 2 - Suzanne's 2nd Draft
    08/31/11
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    Creative Notes:
    Removed a scene, parentheticals, and tightened up a lot of the dialogue. Added a joke or two. Also tried to make Malcolm's motivation clearer. Hopefully it's more readable, less ponderous, and funnier than ever.
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  • Script 1 - Suzanne's Original Draft
    07/11/11
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