Creative Notes:
This revision includes a new opening that shows our hapless protagonist, Warren, with his college sweetheart. We then flash forward thirteen years to his mundane, tortuous existence with his fiance' from hell.
By cutting and tightening some early scenes, I also get us to the inciting incident, Warren discovering his cheating fiance', earlier (around page 11).
By cutting and tightening some early scenes, I also get us to the inciting incident, Warren discovering his cheating fiance', earlier (around page 11).