Creative Notes:
Please read this 8th and final AS draft - Jim.
The Pitch
3 friends, 4 days, $100,000 dollar prize! If only the waffler can remember his BS Pitch so the writer can create a screenplay with plenty of the dreamer’s heart. Or with rent due, no cash and a psycho landlord - their asses look destined for the street
Synopsis:
A homage to Buster Berkeley, his Water Babes, B-Movie Cheese, Groundhog Day and an abundance of Irony...
Everything is not what it seems!
A movie, within a movie, within a mind that all comes together in the end...
Everything is not what it seems!
A movie, within a movie, within a mind that all comes together in the end...
Latest Work
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Script 8 - Jamster's 8th Draft01/04/13
All Work
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Script 7 - Jamster's 7th Draft12/27/12Creative Notes:Please read the 8th draft!
Dusted this one off - hope you enjoy, looking forward to feedback
- cheers, Jim. -
Script 6 - Jamster's 6th Draft12/31/11
Creative Notes:***PLEASE READ THE 8TH DRAFT*** -
Script 5 - Jamster's 5th Draft11/29/11
Creative Notes:***PLEASE READ THE 8th DRAFT!!!*** -
Script 4 - Jamster's 4th Draft10/30/11Creative Notes:PLEASE READ THE 8TH DRAFT!!! added extra motifs / foreshadows and scenes.
Plus made it more intriguing so as to increase full reads - fingers crossed, hint-hint ;-)
Is all what it seems?
"The Pitch": a movie, within a movie, within a mind... I hope you enjoy and are fully entertained - B. Brady. -
Script 3 - Jamster's 3rd Draft08/28/11
Creative Notes:DON'T READ - READ THE 7th DRAFT PLEASE!!! -
Script 2 - Jamster's 2nd Draft07/28/11
Creative Notes:**DON'T READ THIS - READ THE 7TH VERSION INSTEAD**
Fixed a few upload glitches, minor fixes and tweaks to make it a better, more fluid read.
I look forward to hearing from anyone who reads the ENTIRE 90 pages - cheers, Jim -
Script 1 - Jamster's Original Draft07/20/11
Creative Notes:I wrote 95% of the first draft within four days, and completed inside a week.
Rewritten a few times since - it's still 80% the original idea.
I enjoyed writing this and allowed the characters to take me on a journey: 'life imitates art' or 'art imitates life?'
With 'Irony' slap-bang in the center of this story - I hope you enjoy the ride & look forward to any feedback.
Cheers, Jim.