- Creator: Jamster
- Genres: Thriller and Suspense, Horror
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Pray for Dawn
The city of Brisbane is about to experience something truly terrifying. Will the few people that know what's happening be enough to stop it?
Synopsis:
Four very different people cross paths through out this story as the city of Brisbane Australia begins to crumble.
Like a cancer, something has gotten a foot hold in the city and is counting down untill it is ready to bring the city to its knees.
House by house, city block by city block. When was the last time you saw your neighbour?
Like a cancer, something has gotten a foot hold in the city and is counting down untill it is ready to bring the city to its knees.
House by house, city block by city block. When was the last time you saw your neighbour?
Latest Work
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Script 10 - Jamster's 5th Draft03/21/13
All Work
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Script 9 - Jamster's 4th Draft12/31/11Creative Notes:My final draft of 2011 - enjoy!
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Script 8 - Stephen's 5th Draft12/19/11Creative Notes:Formatting has been fixed and it should be a much better read now. Along with a few tweaks to the dialogue. Everyone let me know what you think.
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Script 7 - Stephen's 4th Draft11/07/11
Creative Notes:A small update and dialogue polish -
Script 6 - Stephen's 3rd Draft10/22/11
Creative Notes:changed a few scenes around and included a lot of Jamsters dialogue revisions. Cleaned up a few scenes that were nagging me. -
Script 5 - Jamster's 3rd Draft09/30/11
Creative Notes:*READ THE 4TH DRAFT* I added extra character development (mainly Walter) due to an improved ending.
I'm getting a great 'feel' for the story and added many nice touches too.
I was going to wait until Stephen added his 3rd draft but feel this will help show where I'm at with his fab story. Glad to say that Stephen is happy with my input and I can't wait to see his next installment. -
Script 4 - Jamster's 2nd Draft09/18/11
Creative Notes:***PLEASE-READ-DRAFT-FOUR***
This is my second draft of Stephen's excellent sp.
I added more story, plus had a go at the ending, which most said needed something.
I also put some humor in, developed a couple of characters and left a possible direction for a sequel...
I really hope you enjoy this draft - please feel free to let me know what you think
- cheers, Jim. -
Script 3 - Stephen's 2nd Draft09/11/11
Creative Notes:Added a few nifty ideas from Jamsters drafts. It has added a new level to the script. -
Script 2 - Jamster's 1st Draft09/06/11
Creative Notes:I really loooove this story Stephen - I have added a reason why no one realise what is actually happening.
I have made it flow better, added, removed and sharpened many scenes.
There are other areas of logic which need to be sorted, plus other bits of business, which I shall let gestate in the old noggin before I put up a 2nd draft.
I hope you enjoy - cheers, Jim. -
Script 1 - Stephen's Original Draft08/26/11
Creative Notes:I really want some feed back on this people. Good or bad, I don't care, as long as it's constructive.