Creative Notes:
***PLEASE READ THIS VERSION*** Give this story ago - I know it needs more character stuff - looking forward to any input you may have.
Enjoy the ride, Jim.
Enjoy the ride, Jim.
"4"
An ex-CIA/SAS man has forty-four hours to locate and disable four nuclear devices before they decimate four European cities.
Synopsis:
An 'old school' Actioner with a nice twist at the end.
An ex-SAS/Company man sick to death of the 'game' and retired from the job two years earlier is forced back by unfolding events.
With 44 hours (noon Easter Sunday) to solve the clues left by the head terrorist, locate and disarm 4 Nuclear Mines before they reach 4 Cities somewhere in Europe.
As time clicks down the pace increases and we hurtle toward a thrilling conclusion but denouement reveals a surprising twist as the true story is finally revealed...
Advertising Tag: "1-44-2-4"
An ex-SAS/Company man sick to death of the 'game' and retired from the job two years earlier is forced back by unfolding events.
With 44 hours (noon Easter Sunday) to solve the clues left by the head terrorist, locate and disarm 4 Nuclear Mines before they reach 4 Cities somewhere in Europe.
As time clicks down the pace increases and we hurtle toward a thrilling conclusion but denouement reveals a surprising twist as the true story is finally revealed...
Advertising Tag: "1-44-2-4"
Latest Work
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Script 6 - Jamster's 7th Draft01/21/13
All Work
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Script 5 - Jamster's 6th Draft01/14/13Creative Notes:***PLEASE READ THE LATEST DRAFT***
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Script 4 - Jamster's 4th Draft05/11/12
Creative Notes:**PLEASE READ THE LATEST DRAFT**
I hope you enjoy the journey and look forward to any new feedback that you may have
- cheers, Jim. -
Script 3 - Jamster's 3rd Draft03/27/12
Creative Notes:**PLEASE READ 5TH DRAFT**
Tighter than my 2nd draft - made it read faster and smoother and @101 its 2 pages less and a full 12 pages under my original upload!
Please enjoy the ride and I look forward to more excellent feedback - cheers, Jim. -
Script 2 - Jamster's 2nd Draft03/22/12
Creative Notes:***PLEASE READ 5TH DRAFT***
This is a better (minus 10 pages - e.g. hero page 8) and much improved vsn: interactions/clarity/ dialogue etc. Not all ideas/feedback used BUT it did make me 're-think' my story - still digesting a lot of stuff.
I look forward to any "reviews"/"pm's" to help me craft this into a future 'test movie'.
Many thanks - cheers, Jim. -
Script 1 - Jamster's Original Draft02/13/12Creative Notes:***PLEASE READ MOST RECENT DRAFT***
Looking for more excellent feedback like Antony's, plus some I've received via PM to improve "4".
And I'm hoping for additional gems to improve and tighten my story even further - enjoy!
Cheers guys, Jim.