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Oakland

I am a writer/director with a wide-ranging interest in world cinema. i use my background in shooting and editing to pay rent, B...

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Marlboro, VT

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Long Island

Screenplays

 
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Valencia, Spain

Writer, Interviewer/presenter (documentary)

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Writer, Director

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Longmont, CO

Actor, Director, Writer

 
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Actor, Musician, Writer, Composer, Songwriter, Etc

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Los Angeles & sometimes Hilo, Hawaii

Hollywood, Obi-wan said it best..."you'll never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy."

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Hanover

 
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Port Orange, FL

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Writer, Director, Producer - earthlight entertainment inc.

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IRMO

Animator, Writer

 
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Writer, Actress

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"every writer is a frustrated actor who recites his lines in the hidden auditorium of his skull." ...rod serling

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I'm just one man doing the job of a million monkeys with a million typewriters.

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The Detroit Metroplex

Writer, Electrician, Audio noodler

 
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Excuse me while i whip this out.

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West Hollywood

Writer of fiction and non-fiction; also a digital animator and editor

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joe

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Writer, House music

 
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Writer, Director, Storyboard

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Madison

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Elo

A dysfunctional individual who struggles to maintain a mask of normalcy

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Folsom

Director, Editor, Producer, Writer

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San Francisco, CA

Writer, Actor, Artist, Director

 

Recent Reviews from Top Reviewers

Good idea - that could turn into a great script - all depends on how you expand it.

2.5 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
April 18, 2014
One Dream Away is a short free writing exercise in trying to find the storyline and characters. We are introduced to Jacob and his desire to pursue his dreams of the arts, while his parents want him to focus on more mainstream aspects of... Read more

A good story that needs to dig a bit deeper

3.0 stars
Reviewed by Joseph Laramore
April 16, 2014
15 page review.

The story seems like it will be enjoyable, a maid and a caretaker (who are presumably married) saving the estate they grew up in. When the current owners want to demolish the place, Mindy and Lyle dust off old books of... Read more

Potential is there - mixing horror with fantasy - it's worth writing as a full script.

3.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
April 13, 2014
Beyond the Damned is a short snippet of script, about nine pages. It's too short to use all the criteria of judging a full length script, so I will take it as a very exciting free writing exercise to find the scenes and character.
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Brilliant premise! Good start - time to write the entire screenplay!

4.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
April 11, 2014
You Never Knew Me is not a full length script or an entire outline, rather it’s a shortened version of the first act. We are introduced to Ken Tapston and see the life which he has created for himself. Other characters are Jenna, Susan, ... Read more

Very well-written, interesting story

4.6 stars
Reviewed by joe
April 10, 2014
I was drawn to your story because I enjoy war movies especially concerning WWII, and especially ones that cover an angle I'd never seen or heard of before.

It was very dark and a very cerebral piece that made me think a lot about... Read more

Fresh and Original! This is a stunning thriller - I do have a few questions

3.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
April 09, 2014
Luberobe is an intelligent and will written thriller – following the story of Winston and his recruitment to aid a group of associates by retrieving a document for them and reading from it. Unknowingly, Winston unleashes greater evil upo... Read more

Read the second draft

1.0 stars
Reviewed by joe
April 08, 2014
I think you have a good premise with a genius trying to recruit a bunch of misfits to become superheros in a sort of Justice League squad. I also like that Blivious around page 30 has acquired the power he sought to be the best villain a... Read more

Great story! Interesting characters - I'd like to see more details of the characters and world!

4.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
April 07, 2014
The title on the script is Ke's Tales - The Chosen is Gone, draft 2, while the title on you AS pages is Ke's Tales - The Chosen One is Gone, draft 1. So, perhaps I read the wrong script, but I read the one that's available... Read more

I love it! Just some 4 issues addressed…

5.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
April 07, 2014
The story concept is unique and of deep, deep originality I must say. It’s got a working hook, compelling enough and I like the fact that it does not stop with the premise statement and synopsis account but it is also portrayed in the sc... Read more

So far so promising, need to make it so far so good! It deserves that more strive!

3.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
April 04, 2014
About screenplay format, I must say that, basing on my previous reviews of the old drafts, there’s far great improvement.

About structuring, the plain dream-wake repetitive sequencing is not a working idea without incorporating 3-Act ... Read more