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Oakland

I am a writer/director with a wide-ranging interest in world cinema. i use my background in shooting and editing to pay rent, B...

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Marlboro, VT

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Long Island

Screenplays

 
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Valencia, Spain

Writer, Interviewer/presenter (documentary)

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Writer

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Writer

 
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Writer, Director

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Longmont, CO

Actor, Director, Writer

 
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Actor, Musician, Writer, Composer, Songwriter, Etc

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Los Angeles & sometimes Hilo, Hawaii

Hollywood, Obi-wan said it best..."you'll never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy."

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Hanover

 
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Port Orange, FL

Writer

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Writer, Director, Producer - earthlight entertainment inc.

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IRMO

Animator, Writer

 
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Writer, Actress

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Writer

 
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"every writer is a frustrated actor who recites his lines in the hidden auditorium of his skull." ...rod serling

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I'm just one man doing the job of a million monkeys with a million typewriters.

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The Detroit Metroplex

Writer, Electrician, Audio noodler

 
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Atlanta

Writer, Actor, Retired cop

Jim

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Excuse me while i whip this out.

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West Hollywood

Writer of fiction and non-fiction; also a digital animator and editor

 

joe

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Writer, House music

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Writer, Director, Storyboard

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Writer

 
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Madison

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Folsom

Director, Editor, Producer, Writer

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San Francisco, CA

Writer, Actor, Artist, Director

 

Recent Reviews from Top Reviewers

Imagitive Script - very well done - need to expand to full length

4.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 23, 2014
I wasn’t sure what to expect from “Bob Goes to Hell”, but it sounded original enough that I wanted to read it and I’m glad I did! You are a very good writer! The script unfolded naturally and was a very quick read as we follow Bob who go... Read more

Great premise - Great 3rd act - A few questions...

3.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 14, 2014
Remember the Dark is a story about Anthony, his cousin Mario and some friends who go to explore a slaughterhouse with a scary reputation. Part of the back story is someone had a friend who went there with other friends and stumbled acros... Read more

Fantastic adventure! Great and original premise, a pleasure to read!!!

4.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 09, 2014
Professor Moriarty Archcriminal is a fast paced and exciting story bringing the Pinkerton detective agency into contact with the world of Sherlock Holmes and Professor Moriarty. The story follows John, an agent of Pinkerton, who returns ... Read more

Amazing draft! Rich in tone and human emotion!!!

5.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 08, 2014
Back to the Old House is the story of Marty and the challenges he faces if he wants to return home. His mother is dying and a phone call calls Marty home one last time, but he has done something so awful he knows family and friends don’t... Read more

Wonderful! Great story, great writing!

4.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 08, 2014
Phoenix on the Mountain tells the story of Feng Shan Ho who risked his life to save over 1,000 Jewish people during World War II by issuing visas to China. The script flows very smoothly and the formatting looks great.

This is a wond... Read more

Not a bad idea...

2.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
July 04, 2014
The concept is not a bad idea, though I personally prefer a land lord who’s not blood-related to any of the rent-demanded, as such would be more motivational to them since it rubs out family sympathy.

The script has some format issues... Read more

Brilliant premise! Romeo and Juliet and the American Civil War!

3.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 03, 2014
The Lone Pair is the story which takes place 50 years after the fall of America when two lovers find themselves on the opposite sides on the battlefield. We are introduced to David and Dawn, a young man and woman who finds themselves on ... Read more

Tough subject - great emotional potential - reminds me of Taxi Driver

4.7 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
July 03, 2014
Hold My hand is a tough drama about a girl, Amanda, being controlled by a pimp and how she tries to get out of her situation. The script is a shortened version of the first act, you show the characters and situation, of Amanda being forc... Read more

Good start - do you want to keep this in line with actual events or turn it into a regular comedy?

3.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
June 27, 2014
Fappin is the story of three middle-age men who are friends that discover they are all seeing the same girl. The three friends have to decide who’s going to get the girl and as they do so, each tells his own story about her and how frust... Read more

Strong opening, interesting premise - so many ways you could take the storyline -

3.0 stars
Reviewed by John Alberts
June 27, 2014
Mother and Son is a short snippet of script about a mother and her son hiding in a bunker as creatures pass by outside. There is an implication from a newspaper article that creatures have emerged from the sea and might have destroyed a ... Read more