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(Oakland)

I am a writer/director with a wide-ranging interest in world cinema. i use my background in shooting and editing to pay rent, B...

Winner: Best Script
Finalist: Best Script, Best Horror Script
Semifinalist: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script, Best Horror Script
 
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(Marlboro, VT)

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(Long Island)

Screenplays

 
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(Valencia, Spain)

Writer, Interviewer/presenter (documentary)

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(Kampala)

Writer

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Writer

 
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Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
 
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I'm a fuel injected suicide machine.

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Writer, Director

 
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(Longmont, CO)

Actor, Director, Writer

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(Los Angeles & sometimes Hilo, Hawaii)

Hollywood, Obi-wan said it best..."you'll never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy."

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(Vancouver)

Freelance writer specializing in science and science fiction

 
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(Port Orange, FL )

Writer

Semifinalist: Best Script
 
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(Leesburg)

Photographer/screenwriter

Winner: Best Test Movie, Best Drawn Storyboard, Best Dialogue Track, Best Script
Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Drawn Storyboard, Best Dialogue Track, Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Drawn Storyboard, Best Dialogue Track, Best Script
 
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Writer, Director, Producer - earthlight entertainment inc.

 
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(IRMO)

Animator, Writer

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Writer, Actress

Finalist: Best Script, Best Horror Script
Semifinalist: Best Script, Best Horror Script
 
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Semifinalist: Best Script
 
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Writer

Finalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script
 
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I'm just one man doing the job of a million monkeys with a million typewriters.

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"every writer is a frustrated actor who recites his lines in the hidden auditorium of his skull." ...rod serling

 
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(The Detroit Metroplex)

Writer, Electrician, Audio noodler

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Jim

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Excuse me while i whip this out.

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(West Hollywood)

Writer of fiction and non-fiction; also a digital animator and editor

 
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(Madison)

Writer

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(New Haven)

Mother, Homework corrector, Fever buster, Scraped knee fixer, Dreamer, Boo boo eradicator

Winner: Best Trailer
Finalist: Best Trailer
Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Trailer
 
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(Folsom)

Director, Editor, Producer, Writer

 
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(San Francisco, CA)

Writer, Actor, Artist, Director

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(California)

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(Chicago)

Writer

 

Recent Reviews from Top Reviewers

Excitin’, hookin’…

5.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
May 07, 2013
To begin with is the story-sum up as by the writer: Haunted by a figure she saw in the eye of a cyclone, a girl discovers individuals creating brutal weather events and learns they are drawing together to kill thousands with a super-sto... Read more

Save the babe!

4.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
May 07, 2013
A great story, reminds me of Prince of Persia, I have found it a wow move feeding the world with another like that; however, Dancaster’s Pardon story concept has a recognizable degree of uniqueness compared to Prince of Persia. A look a... Read more

A story of how crazily force frustration can push!

4.2 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
May 07, 2013
I liked the writers’ striving to make a combination of Thriller and Suspense plus horror. As the story concept is by story sum up: Young, Crazed, Homicidal, Woman enters her script at Amazon Studios. When it doesn't win right away,... Read more

The ego of a soldier girl!

5.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
May 07, 2013
After having written the previous draft a review, I really however have nothing much to say, just as the other draft was a wow, so is this one. The cinematic value and more as I previously described them in details still stand out fine... Read more

A world of the lost!

5.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
May 07, 2013
I indeed see it’s a sixth draft! Story structuring and pacing not bad. Charming dialogue though I prefer parentheses have their own lines. I also prefer not to see the cast listing. Great job anyway! Don’t hesitate to spare a little time... Read more

What it takes to cling to a lifestyle!

4.5 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
May 07, 2013
Southern Heart first and foremost I must say has a unique story concept; it was unique of the writer, as shown in the creative notes, to develop a story based on a local family heard about while studying about a civil war in the family’s... Read more

Good story, well written

5.0 stars
Reviewed by Billie Harris
April 30, 2013
Good detective story and I find nothing to point out in the way of glaring errors. Saw one misspelled word but easy to overlook those. And, as the writer knows, a producer may not want the songs mentioned in the script or they may be ... Read more

Great job! The journey to betterment is a necessity!

3.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
April 28, 2013
‘Carnivale’ has a unique story concept; it’s got a recognizable degree of originality, and a compelling hook as well.

However, as explored below, there are issues demanding fix as far as the script is concerned.

Each scene change... Read more

A nice story!

3.0 stars
Reviewed by B. J. Edmund
April 28, 2013
‘Wonderland’ is an interesting screenplay story; it’s got a compelling hook in addition to it’s uniqueness that earns it a degree of originality.

Well, getting to the script, I notice the story flow is not bad but there is something a... Read more

Excellent log line and script has a lot of potential.

4.0 stars
Reviewed by Billie Harris
April 21, 2013
In reading the premise wars, came across the one for this script. Most of us have difficulty writing loglines. They need a good hook and this one definitely hooked me in for a read. The writer did an excellent job grabbing my atten... Read more