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Great Revision!

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Semifinalist: Best Test Movie, Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
 
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Elizabeth Cauley

California
October 17, 2011
Nathan added a lot of great little touches. Overall it's a stronger and tighter script. I'm really happy he took the time to revise this one! Great job Nathan!
 

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If At First, Nathan's 1st Draft

Creator:
Nathan Lawrence
 
Genre:
Thriller and Suspense, Action and Adventure
 
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