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I thought this was a good film in all aspects. Animation and camera movement was very good, and above that of other films I have watched on AS. The rest of the film, story, dialogue, characters, etc. was good but I do think it could be better. Some of the lines were delivered without emotion when it would have been more effective with proper voice inflection (work with actors). Overall, I think it would be greatly improved by polishing what is there. Make it all a little "smarter" and sharper. Try and create action that is not run-of-the-mill genre sequences. It's OK to be genre, but add a little twist to the usual here and there. And just review the dialogue and see where it can be sharpened and smarter....it was a little too generic. Now I find myself writing a little too critically....it was good, but can be better. Just polish!!

This is what kids are taught computers for? What a waste of bandwidth and a reflection of your users'
taste dribbling down the corporate gullet. Graffiti For Dummies. Stick to selling books and all the crap made outside the USA.