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This needs a lot of work. It was true to the script, but required more compositional refining.

The pace is too slow, making a lot potential funny moments less humorous.

I would stick to your concept of animation to real life, as it could potentially work; I would consider more insert and closeups for the slower moments in the movie.

The acting could use more direction on all fronts, both in animation dialogue and live action.

Good concepts across the board, you just need to find a way to speed things up within a scene, and keep the viewer engaged.

Lura Rada Miami Fl

Animation with real life characters excellent

Using a topic of "Today" facebook, cellphone info etc., well incorporated for audience target

Script did slow down in scenes

Female driver changing from cold to a "Sexy" loving character in car scene did not come through to this viewer -- it was not understood

Over all this rough draft was very good

Keep pursuing your dream!

After reviewing this highly acclaimed film I had a few notes I wanted to put in review form. Even though it stayed true to the script, it lacked substance in almost every other area. The acting seems plain, almost as though the actors had read the script minutes before shooting the final cuts. Maybe a quick how to film school youtube video could have helped, and I hope it cost next to nothing to film because I could think of dozens of better ideas that any sort of funding could have went to. I think I only decided to view this film out of complete skepticism that it was gonna be good.

Rishi is awesome!!!!!

Great idea, great cast and story, dialog could use a lil work but overall could be a blockbuster with a tweek or two! Cant wait to see if theres a better rendering or a master copy! Good work guys!