All Reviews

With a good budget this movie will be great. So many ideas come to mind when you mix Atlantis lore and alt history, a genre that will beg for a big blockbuster to set it in motion.

Just terrible. not historical, a rip off of raiders of the lost ark! There are so many true stories that would make a better movie. Do a little research. The german and nazi thing is getting old!

The writing for this was beyond awful. Watch a few Tarantino flicks. Read the script for Inglorious Basterds. Then scrap this and start over.

I think the dialogue needs a lot of help. It really does smack of the original Star Wars movie. I think the final shootout scene was a little too unbelievable with all the shooting and hydrogen fumes. I thought that Jack's plane should show fire power not just running away since they knew there would be fighting. Dumping all they're cargo at the submarine fight seemed to far fetched, not to mention falling out of the blimp at that height. You need to make it more believable if you want the audience to take it seriously. It was a nice idea, look what it did for Star Wars.

Each scene in a film should contribute to the story, to developing audience empathy for the characters, or to visual and auditory sensations. Of course even a mediocre film can redeem itself if the first ten, and last ten, minutes are truly memorable. Sadly this film just doesn't meet any of the criteria for a successful film.

The first ten minutes? Dull, nothing catchy or memorable. And why would the Germans risk killing the man they are trying to capture? Makes absolutely zero sense.

Characters? Not a shred of originality here. The hero is bombastic, rude and materialistic. Lame girl heroine falls for him (which is sad)... the end. No-one else really has a significant role which is unfortunate as bad guys (or girls) can be so entertaining since by default they have no limits on their actions. The hero isn't convincing even as a derivative Hans Solo. The girl? Whoever wrote this story needs to try dating a few. Remember, your characters need to grow and develop as people, or really, what's the point?

Story? Linear, no surprises here. A rework of at least a half dozen films I could name, starting with Indiana Jones and ending with Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow (oh yeah, and throw in a dose of The Phantom to cover the girl and the jungle). Not one shred of originality in sight.

Last ten minutes? So trite I could only groan in horror as the story winds down to a predictable and cliche riddled end.

In short, this would be an excellent film for the SyFy channel. And no, that's not a compliment.

I strongly suggest the author of this work should go watch "The Power of Myth" programs to understand about the underlying key themes of meaningful stories. It worked for George Lucas, so maybe it will work for this author?

The story board was good however. See? It's not all bad. And I would like to thank the author for prompting me to write... something.

Need a different theme song that one is played out. Also don’t have the Kernel treat the black guy with such little respect, the white officer picking on the poor black man is played out too. Tone that down. otherwise not a bad show. I think it would be pretty cool with modern day graphics.

Here's the problem with zeppelins. The Germans stopped using zeppelins by 1940. The problem was that they were too slow and too vulnerable to fight because of the use of hydrogen which was highly flammable. Also, the story pulls too much from "Raiders of the Lost Ark" with a very weak plot line using some mythical nonsense pertaining back to Atlantis. The movies needs more work and less reliance on using this type of theme. It's old and stale now.