Overall Recommendation:
3.9 stars
(43)
5 Stars:
34.88%
(15)
 
4 Stars:
39.53%
(17)
 
3 Stars:
13.95%
(6)
 
2 Stars:
6.98%
(3)
 
1 Stars:
4.65%
(2)
 
Premise:
4.0 stars
(41)
 
Story structure:
3.9 stars
(41)
 
Character:
3.7 stars
(41)
 
Dialogue:
3.5 stars
(41)
 
Emotion:
3.3 stars
(41)
 
 
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2 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

I wish only the best for this story

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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Safford, AZ
January 27, 2012
I didn't give criteria stars because I don't feel qualified to judge a script on this level. I felt this was a very fictional story, very James Bondish, but what do you expect from an action-adventure story involving alchemy and fighting Neo-Nazis for the secret of transmutation of lead into gold. Otherwise, it's great and the finalist I like the best.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

great story board movie love to see a real movie.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
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bellevlle
February 17, 2013
Would make a great series of movies with the right production and actors.
Can easily be a blockbuster series or a b rated flop depending on production.
Can see the Rock and Rachel Weiss as the main char.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Loved it

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
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Virginia Beach
March 02, 2012
I loved the Alchemist Agenda. I almost did not watch it because the title leads me to believe it would be a campy fantasy story. After reading the description I gave it watch. I was not disappointed. I’d love to see this as a movie. I’d change the name, and work on developing the back story a little more of the main characters. I’d also go into a little more development of the hidden villain and assignation plot. Even left as I think it would be an entertaining movie.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

a good entertaining flick

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
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March 06, 2012
Solid job. With more interesting side characters, it can defenitely make for an entertaining action flick.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Sweet

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
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waco
February 02, 2012
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Great action, Bad romance

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
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Brattleboro
March 04, 2012
I think this is a great story. Lots of action. I like that the Female lead is a strong intelligent woman. But, they fall into bed a litt too quickly. More subtlety in their relationship would add to the tension. Action is great but sexual tension is even better. Maybe more insinuation or conflicted looks. Then again though, a movie is short and this is an action film.

These are my reactions though, take them for what you will. It reads more like a novel. Maybe a movie is not the best way to frame this story. Maybe a series of short films like a mini series......that's another conversation though.

Thanks, I enjoyed it, Patrick Kitzmiller
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

A Tight, Well Crafted Action Adventure

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
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Scottsdale, AZ
February 02, 2012
This is a well-paced action adventure story that's a nice blend of Johnny Quest, Borne Identity, and Da Vinci Code. I was surprised that I could be captivated by a movie consisting of storyboards for visuals. I was caught up in this film from the start and it held my attention throughout. I'm actually looking forward to seeing this film produced as a live-action feature. Excellent job.
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Movie is just a note away!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
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Lubbock
June 11, 2012
The Only thing that would put a damper on this movie is keeping the music! The story line and dialoge is very good but the the music was too "james bondy" !
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Interesting premise

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
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S A

April 07, 2012
Dialogue needs some work, it seemed a little too hokey in some parts ( is it supposed to be in the same vain as National Treasure or more serious?).
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Good story

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
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Pentwater
March 29, 2012
Nazi gold, stories of this have been capturing our hearts for years. I would probably watch this. Kinda american james bondish. Without the cool gadgets. Don't think it would be at the top of my list though. Most movies these days are regurgitations of movies past. The good guy always wins.
 

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