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Just under 11,000 words your 102-page script would definitely be a fast read, (I went to page 32 before jumping to the end to peek) but messing with format by adding extra space for page count will not get by the judges. Opening scene was good to set the story, and into the college for the other main characters moved it along nicely. So far to this point and to page 32, nothing new in concept/story (Same old) to make me want to read further, other then to know what happens to Rae, which I peeked at the ending. I will admit, after peeking, how the Charlie character enters the story got my interest to maybe finish the SP. But again, all seems like I‘ve seen this story too many times, so at this time decided not to keep reading. Best of luck on the rewrite.
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