First off - I really enjoyed this. I thought the characters were well realised and the dialogue was really good.
However...
I really think you've put this script in the wrong place. If it is a series then it should be in the series section. It quite clearly isn't a movie. I feel you've missed the chance for people to see this script. I am not sure if someone else has pointed this out to you already and, if they have, then I apologise.
It is very darkly comic and I would love to see more. So good luck
However...
I really think you've put this script in the wrong place. If it is a series then it should be in the series section. It quite clearly isn't a movie. I feel you've missed the chance for people to see this script. I am not sure if someone else has pointed this out to you already and, if they have, then I apologise.
It is very darkly comic and I would love to see more. So good luck