I have read the script. Dialouge at certian parts are cliche but all in all, this has blockbuster potential. I read scripts for a living and this one it down right great! Keep up the good work!
You are sucked into this world within the first three pages. Not the first ten, but three. There's a turn every couple of pages. Just when I think I know what's going to happen next, the turn takes a turn. For such a complicated storyline, it's held together with concrete and it moves fluidly. Most movies die in the second act, this script just gets stronger.
The potential is here. Not only does this script have the potential for a hollywood classic, but it can draw in the "Eastern Indians" as well. Not many movies can draw them out due to their devoution to culture. This movie can break down that barrier, and open up that market. Wide open.