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We Were Vampire - Technical Director review

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5 stars
 
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December 03, 2010
This script is absolutely fabulous; It is a new twist to Vampire tales. I have had the rare privilege of watching this script grow from it original seventeen page short. Joshua you are an amazing story teller. I loved the characters and that you subtly pitted your two main characters against each other and found a way to create just the right tension. I also enjoyed the New and exciting Vampire Lore you have created. It makes for very interesting dimensions between all your characters. I enjoyed the twist at the very end. The emotion of this script was captivating. The dialog isn’t perfect but the story is believable. EXCELLENT JOB Josh!
 
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Wonderfully refreshingly different!

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Lacey, WA.
December 04, 2010
This story is incredible. I couldn't wait to read what would happen next! I'm hoping someone picks this up and makes a movie out of it because the story goes above and beyond the typical "vampire story;" opening so many other doors to further delve into the mysterious secret world which Josh has created. This could be a really big hit, and possibly a series of blockbusters : )

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