This script is absolutely fabulous; It is a new twist to Vampire tales. I have had the rare privilege of watching this script grow from it original seventeen page short. Joshua you are an amazing story teller. I loved the characters and that you subtly pitted your two main characters against each other and found a way to create just the right tension. I also enjoyed the New and exciting Vampire Lore you have created. It makes for very interesting dimensions between all your characters. I enjoyed the twist at the very end. The emotion of this script was captivating. The dialog isn’t perfect but the story is believable. EXCELLENT JOB Josh!
This story is incredible. I couldn't wait to read what would happen next! I'm hoping someone picks this up and makes a movie out of it because the story goes above and beyond the typical "vampire story;" opening so many other doors to further delve into the mysterious secret world which Josh has created. This could be a really big hit, and possibly a series of blockbusters : )