PROS I thought the concept of this script was very interesting. I loved the first scene, totally drew me in and got me interested. I also really enjoyed that we were right there with Roger the whole script, not sure of what is happening. I thought his past was revealed organically and the twists with it genuinely intrigued me.
CONS I think that a lot more could have been done with this script, suspense-wise. I was expecting, from the premise, that there would be some kind of big mystery of who killed his wife and it would have a lot to do with the amnesia. However, by the end of the movie, there wasn't a big reveal. The romance between Macie & Sara was revealed in the middle and we find out about the hit on Roger very early on. I think that the lack of suspense was frustrating for me.
Overall, interesting concept and good character. With more action and suspense this could be a much stronger script.
I thought the concept of this script was very interesting. I loved the first scene, totally drew me in and got me interested. I also really enjoyed that we were right there with Roger the whole script, not sure of what is happening. I thought his past was revealed organically and the twists with it genuinely intrigued me.
CONS
I think that a lot more could have been done with this script, suspense-wise. I was expecting, from the premise, that there would be some kind of big mystery of who killed his wife and it would have a lot to do with the amnesia. However, by the end of the movie, there wasn't a big reveal. The romance between Macie & Sara was revealed in the middle and we find out about the hit on Roger very early on. I think that the lack of suspense was frustrating for me.
Overall, interesting concept and good character. With more action and suspense this could be a much stronger script.