This draft especially is an Exciting, high concept, broadly marketable, thrilling story and screenplay. The story itself and the ending is very exciting and fun to see what will happen next. Plot points and beats are thrilling and scary and surprised me a few times. Writer has a great control over dialogue and emotional depth. The only thing I would maybe say to work on is distinguishing the different characters' voices, but that is an easy fix. I can imagine this movie doing well at box office. It is like Jurassic Park but with killer animals and I love the dark, grimy eco-terrorist aspect. And also this theme of saving endangered animals and animal rights is very timely as the Siberian tiger is your main star and that tiger is in the news a lot now for being so endangered that celebrities and government officials are getting involved in that summit a few months ago.