It's obvious this guy directs (and possibly films) his own movies. As far as putting his visions on paper, it needs work. Paragraphs are too long. when they're reformatted to the proper guideline, this movie will be way longer than the standard 90-120 pages. The premise is already too sick for theater, so over 120 minutes of slashing is too much.
the story never escalates. lacks suspense and conflict. it's just one long slasher fest.
the story never escalates. lacks suspense and conflict. it's just one long slasher fest.