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This is a heck of a first draft. The premise is exciting--I mean, what would any of us do if we saw this happen? It takes off immediately, and it does not let up. If the script's exciting, the film would be a blast. It reminds me of "Unstoppable," but this is way better than "Unstoppable," which was a good story but a cruddy script. The characters are great. We quickly know exactly who Sam Drabing is, and Nordberg is a hoot (what's up with his excitement about the English language?). No, it's not just because we share the same last name: I can honestly say this is a ragtag, full-blown smash of a script, and it'd be a hell of a movie. I can't wait for another draft.

This could be the next "Die Hard." I shot through this script after I read his so-far only other script, "Collegiate Behavior," which was extremely impressive. This may even be better. "Thanksgiving Day Parade" is a great idea with which everyone can connect. But we might not all make this decision, and that gives this script a whole new element of fantasy. The action is outrageous, over the top and exciting. The script is surprising--the story structure never lets up. Great dialogue, especially from Sgt. Black (the other review said it was Nordberg, but Nordberg's the other cop). Sam Drabing is a great creation, an everyman to give John McClane a run for his money. This deserves a run at moviegoers' money. This might not even need another draft. Check it out!