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Premise:
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1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Pretty Good Stuff

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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Fullerton
November 27, 2010
So what did he tell you ???? Just kidding. This was pretty funny, I liked the back and forth with yourself quite a bit. If I were you I would find a way to expand this so it can become prize eligible. I would also add a little bit more of the comedy into the first few minutes. The begging wasn't bad but you start to get the feeling it's a documentary. Just my thoughts.
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
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3 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
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Tiverton, Devon
November 18, 2010
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Good Start

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3 stars
 
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3 stars
 
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3 stars
 
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3 stars
 
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February 18, 2011
It was good, the audio was a bit harsh. But it needs to be rated 13 and over at least. The guy swears way too much. Maybe in England it's a bit different, but here in America if you're going to have a potty mouth, you need to rate the film accordingly. It is a good idea.
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Brilliant!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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London
November 18, 2010
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Brilliant!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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November 18, 2010
Nice hat, mate.
I love that you chose to use a low budget grainy camera and poor quality audio effects. I think it really adds to the message of a struggling writer.
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

A very enjoyable, well-acted little film!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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London
November 18, 2010
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Superb

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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LDN
November 19, 2010
Simply Brilliant
 
1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

I found this quite inspirational

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
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December 07, 2010
... thanks Andrew! I really enjoyed this. Nice editing job too.

I'm not sure where you want to go with this project but it seems you could expand a bit. Maybe add a mash-up of comical attempts to break through the block in the beginning.

I'm going to now imagine meeting and talking to my future self, where I've completed and submitted several screenplays to Amazon Studios that are getting rave reviews. I'll let you know what he tell me. ; )
 
1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Not bad.

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
1 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
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NJ
November 23, 2010
Great attempt, but very much needs a tighter rewrite.
 

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