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Pretty Good Stuff
So what did he tell you ???? Just kidding. This was pretty funny, I liked the back and forth with yourself quite a bit. If I were you I would find a way to expand this so it can become prize eligible. I would also add a little bit more of the comedy into the first few minutes. The begging wasn't bad but you start to get the feeling it's a documentary. Just my thoughts.
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Thoroughly enjoyed it!!
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Good Start
It was good, the audio was a bit harsh. But it needs to be rated 13 and over at least. The guy swears way too much. Maybe in England it's a bit different, but here in America if you're going to have a potty mouth, you need to rate the film accordingly. It is a good idea.
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Brilliant!
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Brilliant!
Nice hat, mate.
I love that you chose to use a low budget grainy camera and poor quality audio effects. I think it really adds to the message of a struggling writer.
I love that you chose to use a low budget grainy camera and poor quality audio effects. I think it really adds to the message of a struggling writer.
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A very enjoyable, well-acted little film!
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Superb
Simply Brilliant
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I found this quite inspirational
... thanks Andrew! I really enjoyed this. Nice editing job too.
I'm not sure where you want to go with this project but it seems you could expand a bit. Maybe add a mash-up of comical attempts to break through the block in the beginning.
I'm going to now imagine meeting and talking to my future self, where I've completed and submitted several screenplays to Amazon Studios that are getting rave reviews. I'll let you know what he tell me. ; )
I'm not sure where you want to go with this project but it seems you could expand a bit. Maybe add a mash-up of comical attempts to break through the block in the beginning.
I'm going to now imagine meeting and talking to my future self, where I've completed and submitted several screenplays to Amazon Studios that are getting rave reviews. I'll let you know what he tell me. ; )
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Not bad.
Great attempt, but very much needs a tighter rewrite.
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