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A very good work!
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Very Strong Brilliance
Very Brilliant Script. I love scripts and films that incorporate facts and business into some sort of emotional appeal. And the Alchemist Agenda flourishes in that.
Really like what you've done with Jonathan's character and his ultimate goal. Very clever.
Alot of people don't give the opposition in their scripts a great reason for OPPOSING, but you do. They all want the same thing and are working towards the same goal.
Amazing, and would love to see this on screen. I followed you and your project. Take a look at Inversion when you get the chance. Give me some criticism.
Overall: Excellent screenplay, just make sure you put some sort of vision into it and it'll do fine.
-Bradley Eversley
Really like what you've done with Jonathan's character and his ultimate goal. Very clever.
Alot of people don't give the opposition in their scripts a great reason for OPPOSING, but you do. They all want the same thing and are working towards the same goal.
Amazing, and would love to see this on screen. I followed you and your project. Take a look at Inversion when you get the chance. Give me some criticism.
Overall: Excellent screenplay, just make sure you put some sort of vision into it and it'll do fine.
-Bradley Eversley
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For the rest, great job!