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Could it be more cliche?

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Los Angeles, CA
September 12, 2011
This is a completely cliche screenplay that attempts to capture the dynamics of gay parenting. Don't waste your time. You only need to fastforward to the end (the part about how all you need is love) to understand how utterly tedious and poorly crafted this is.
 
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A Season With Sophie Rocks!

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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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Burbank
February 09, 2011
This script is so accessible and so produce-able. It has the perfect balance in all areas and I'm sure you could generate a lot of interest from potential directors and producers alike, not to mention some A-list talent.
Congratulations, this is really an entertaining and heartwarming piece of work!
 
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Awesome. Smart. Funny. Touching. Real. Now.

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5 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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Tom

January 31, 2011
It was a little slow for me in the beginning, but then I couldn't leave my computer to do things I needed to do. I knew I could leave and come back to it, but I couldn't leave. I laughed out loud. I wept quietly. Very smart. Thank you.
 

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