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After the smoke. First review

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
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Dekalb
February 28, 2011
The characters in this were picked well and had great roles. This writer has some great creativity to make this script pop right out at you. Most of the time reading the script, most of the time there would be things possible that you would not even see coming. For instance, the part when Detective Morrison had a flash back in his life. This part shows the creativity of smoke first shooting Morrison in both knee caps and then crawls up the stairs and then is pushed down the stairs by smoked, shows the writers creativity.

The characters this writer has chosen can act just like people in real life. These characters have lead roles that help make a great story line. You can tell who really is the main character of this script.

The last thing I will talk about is the structure of this film. This film was very paced out. During the whole time reading it, there was not any point where it got boring or it just wasn't getting more interesting. There are enough twist and turns in Detective Morrisons character that makes you not want to stop reading.
 

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