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Outstanding script

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November 25, 2011
This is an outstanding script. The writing is effective, descriptive yet tight. The storyline is exciting with no wasted scenes or pages. Characters are well developed with authentic and frequently punchy dialogue. I enjoyed every page of the script’s 108.

The storyline kept my attention really well, the tension/action escalating by the page. It also held a number of unexpected surprises, making me sit up even more.

Most of the script takes place in Iraq. The author has obviously done a great deal of research and it shows through in his work. The script really draws you into its world, and the events that Bishop and his team find themselves in. You feel part of the action, feel what the characters are going through.

On an emotional level, the script grabs you. You understand what Bishop and his fellow veterans are going through, why they would consider going back to Iraq. And when they do, you want them to succeed despite the crazy odds they have of doing so.

From page one, there are frequent bursts of frantic action. All very well written.

Would I like to see this as a movie? Hell yes.

Highly recommended.
 

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