All Reviews

This was a great story. I was intrigued by the premise, but once I got to reading, I couldn't stop. I had to see how this one would end.

The characters are pretty believable. The dialogue, especially from Grace, is very authentic. I hope to see this script go somewhere because this story is wonderful. Love, greed, and passion for work are clearly emotions that come out in this script.

I really like the premise of this story. Felt like 'A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court', but in reverse. Also, I read a book called The Far Arena that dealt with a displaced protagonist in a much similar fashion. Keep working on making the dialogue sound completely natural.