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Thanks for the laughs...

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June 28, 2011
The script is a quick and easy read. It also is well written. I love the dynamic action description and there were moments I did catch myself laughing out loud. The writers are able give the reader nice set ups for the jokes to pay off.

I am going to do more reaseach on "SWISH PAN TO", I've never seen it before in the screenplays I have read. Learning something new everyday.

There isn't much I can say that would add value to the work that has been done.

Thanks for a fun read! Keep up the good work!

MSC
 

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