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This is only a housekeeping cleanup of the original draft. It trims away a little fat (there wasn't much to start with), adds very little that's new, and doesn't solve the fundamental problems pointed out in the AS notes.

Per my previous review of the original, this is a very cool concept, the action scenes are exciting, and the set pieces are creative. The writing is clear and professional and the script is an easy read.

The main problems have already been identified by AS on the script forum: the hero is underdeveloped, the zombies need a supernatural origin story, and there needs to be a better villain.