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Great comedy, laughed the whole way thourgh!

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Vernon Brown

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May 17, 2011
Notes for A Fortune to Kill:

Page 11 I am astonished at the script-man-ship ----- Best script all around I have seen in a while.

It is written in present tense, active voice, and uses strong direct verbs.

And then there's the story itself. Hilarious so far.

Page 20 dialog
"I was told me to come to your
office to meet my Psychic
Detective."


Page 65
Rey lights a, offers one to Detective Lacker.

Page 93
Nadine's vision same as an earlier similar vision. Maybe redundant, not sure. Might check.

Great !

Good read!


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A Fortune to Kill, Doug's Original Draft

Creator:
Doug Shear
 
Genre:
Thriller and Suspense, Comedy
 
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