When you read as many scripts as I do, most of the time you're wading through endless exposition, overwrought action, and on the nose dialogue.
Not in this script.
Here, the writing is lean and light on the page, which helps the story flow from one page to the next. The dialogue is grounded and comes out of character, with each having their own specific voice. Best of all, the writer does not make the characters say what doesn't need to be said.
If there's something more I would want out of this script it would be to take the spare action to the next level. I like it lean as it is, but I would prefer what is there be a bit more subjective, a touch more emotional. Instead of saying "they fight" I'd like the writer's spare approach applied to describing the fight.
Not in this script.
Here, the writing is lean and light on the page, which helps the story flow from one page to the next. The dialogue is grounded and comes out of character, with each having their own specific voice. Best of all, the writer does not make the characters say what doesn't need to be said.
If there's something more I would want out of this script it would be to take the spare action to the next level. I like it lean as it is, but I would prefer what is there be a bit more subjective, a touch more emotional. Instead of saying "they fight" I'd like the writer's spare approach applied to describing the fight.
That said, my favorite on Amazon so far.