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Just a quickie.

Wasn't expecting much from this, i only started to read it because of the cover, freaky.
i must say this is a fine piece of work, the dialogue between the two brothers is some of the funniest
i've ever read, family guy meets the simpsons meets super bad with a twist of lemon.

I'm surprised this hasn't been up for best script yet, plenty of time yet.
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i strongly recomend this to people of all ages.

good luck with the compitition.

This story is some kind intriguing in its simplicity. This script was listed it in the "Kids and family" and "Science fiction" categories. Though english is not my language, I could appreciate your talent in writing dialogs and I thinked of it as a very funny "comedy".

I liked very much some side characters like the Grandmother or Wilson the Sherif and I got attracted from the story when I felt the presence of more people (diversity).

The end part is very nice and rather than a change in the rhythm I could appreciate a jump in quality. All those monsters coming in and that hylarious presence of Elvis.
Probably thinking the story from its end could give you further suggestions. You know why I'm telling this? Because my little nephew was enthusiast when I told him about your story and asked me to tell him the ending part again and again for three times...
Good luck!!!

It's a hoot to read with great conversational gambits at every turn.
Could someone make a test movie please?

I thought this script was very good, the premise is excellent. I felt that the characters were introduced well and their personalaties came across clearly. I would like to see a test movie so that I could better understand the emotion of the characters better. One negative was the introduction of the aliens to the main characters, they did not seem as surprised to see the aliens as I would imagine somebody would be.

this is a great adventure script that will appeal to audiences of all ages combined with hillarious dialogue. I beleive this would make an exciting film to watch.