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I love titles like this, no telling what it is you're about to see/read but hoping for and getting something special
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Great premise, written well (although, too wordy for my liking), strong emotional pull (due to the strong premise), and an endinng that left my slightly underwhelmed.
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Yikes
Just so uninspired. I feel like almost all the scripts I'm reading are the same old same old!!!
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Good writing - boring story
I guess that's the best thing to say. It's good writing...but the dialogue isn't very impressive, the characters are kind of bland (including Blue and Graham), and I guess the whole thing seems boring to me. That's totally a personal thing of course. Some people might enjoy the murder mystery thing. I guess I didn't much like the x-men, sci-fi, made for tv feel to the whole thing. It's funny, because I'm pretty sure this isn't made for adults, yet the content (rapes, murders) is very adult. Who is the audience here? Who are you writing for?
Anyway, decent writing. Could use a better story and characters...and plot....
Anyway, decent writing. Could use a better story and characters...and plot....
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Winner: Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Finalist: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Semifinalist: Best Script, Best Sci-Fi/Action Script
Where the dialogue's got to hold your attention it's crisp and to the point, no verbal wastage. I can see it in my mind's eye, so it's very well written.