All Reviews

Clear movements between the shots. I would suggest a slight visual addition to your main character so she has a unique look to stand out. A mole would work.

Other then that, I like the whole The Morning After feel...can't wait for the dialogue.

Just goes to show what you can do with simple line drawings!

The story boards look great so far. I can't wait to see the final cut with dialog.

Agree that your main char needs to look a bit more unique. Hard to pick her out immediately when you have other female char's in the story.

Also, maybe try a slightly diff look for the flashbacks to make it more obvious that we're looking at flashbacks to the night before.

You lost me a little bit when you got into the story & started cross cutting back & forth, but the story & timeline should be more apparent when the dialogue is added. Overall, good job. Good luck with this!

I like the artwork. The artist shows good expression with a minimum of detail. The music has a driving beat, perfect for the storyline.

I think that you might have more drawings than you really need. In addition, a few on screen titles might help to clarify what's going on. Of course, this is all just my opinion, and I look forward to viewing the completed test movie.

Good luck with it.