Overall Recommendation:
4.1 stars
(12)
5 Stars:
41.67%
(5)
 
4 Stars:
25.0%
(3)
 
3 Stars:
33.33%
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2 Stars:
0%
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1 Stars:
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Premise:
4.4 stars
(12)
 
Story structure:
3.9 stars
(12)
 
Character:
3.7 stars
(12)
 
Dialogue:
3.6 stars
(12)
 
Emotion:
3.8 stars
(12)
 
 
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1 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

I want to see this on the big screen!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
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Story structure:
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Character:
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Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
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Los angeles
October 01, 2011
This is by far the best script i have read on AS.
You are a fantastic writer and i really hope this script will be turned into a movie with the help of AS.
I loved the double protagonists, you fleshed them out so well that it was a pleasure to see them interact with each other and the world around them. They were real people with natural dialogue.
I loved the premise and you gave it an interesting twist.
My favorite line:" you are having a frackin' alien baby"
I appreciated that you took your time to let the story unfold and you did not rush into the action scenes until it was absolutely essential.
I loved reading it.
 
0 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Sounds like a good futuristic thriller

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
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New York City
May 28, 2012
As my title states, I love a good futuristic thriller. If done right, this could be done on the same level as a Blade Runner or Total Recall. Two massive hits in their own rights.

Robert D
 

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