This is by far the best script i have read on AS. You are a fantastic writer and i really hope this script will be turned into a movie with the help of AS. I loved the double protagonists, you fleshed them out so well that it was a pleasure to see them interact with each other and the world around them. They were real people with natural dialogue. I loved the premise and you gave it an interesting twist. My favorite line:" you are having a frackin' alien baby" I appreciated that you took your time to let the story unfold and you did not rush into the action scenes until it was absolutely essential. I loved reading it.
As my title states, I love a good futuristic thriller. If done right, this could be done on the same level as a Blade Runner or Total Recall. Two massive hits in their own rights.
You are a fantastic writer and i really hope this script will be turned into a movie with the help of AS.
I loved the double protagonists, you fleshed them out so well that it was a pleasure to see them interact with each other and the world around them. They were real people with natural dialogue.
I loved the premise and you gave it an interesting twist.
My favorite line:" you are having a frackin' alien baby"
I appreciated that you took your time to let the story unfold and you did not rush into the action scenes until it was absolutely essential.
I loved reading it.