The multiple story lines were intriguing and kept me reading to find out when, how and why they would come together. The characters' multiple lives and roles were interwoven with suspense and, often, sympathy. I couldn't wait to find out what they would do next and what would happen to them.
Particularly given tremendous recent advancements in CGI, there are nearly endless possibilities for ReincarNation’s virtual world – a world already rich and innovative. Vivid detail (Furry Warrens, builder bots, etc.) is provided for the script’s virtual world and clever incorporation of alternative language, viewpoints and motivations adds much to the interest. These variations nicely match those one might expect in such a setting. For example, the idea of virtual world activism (and that real life activists might be drawn to such virtual causes) is thought-provoking.
The script provides strong character development for both the central characters, as well as for the story’s supporting cast (such as Floyd’s parents). This holds true not only for both the real world and virtual world casts.
The juxtaposition between the characters’ real world lives and their imagined lives in ReincarNation is highly imaginative. Also, the interweaving of the two story lines works well, and is brought together very nicely at the end. This project strikes me as having great potential.
LOVE the premise.
Envy the story structure (it's tight!)
Characters are believable and relatable and sympathetic.
Dialogue, as usual for this author, is very natural.
Lots of excitement and satisfying resolutions.
I wanna see the movie!!!!!