This is very powerful. I love the tragic quirky moments. The psychotic normality that Masa's dialog transmits cracks me up in a weird way. Flashbacks really help the story move forward.
I felt that I wanted to know a bit more about Schoolgirl's side of the story. Even though the main arc is for hipster, she seems to be a big part of his change.
I felt I needed more clues that helped me understand why Susuki, Masa and Schoolgirl were buddies when kids.